Score: 8

"Nice job Konni!"

submission: Secret Agents Art Collab

date: November 17, 2009

This was well done.I rather liked the random(although short)intro movie.
Im sorry i couldn't do more art for the collab,its just i was already juggling a few other things i was working on at the time.(Not to mention school...)

Still though it was fun to do.It would be cool to collaborate again in future. ;)

-Dex

Score: 6

"Not bad..."

submission: Globby

date: October 30, 2009

This wasn't that bad.The concept was pretty unoriginal,and it is incredibly similar to the Kirby games.(But if im correct,you mentioned that this was inspired by Kirby.)

First of all,we'll talk about the Graphics and Animation.The graphics were simple,on both the characters and the landscape of levels themselves.Simplicity isn't always a bad thing,and can look great when you know how to pull it off.I didn't really like the character designs personally.They were unimaginative and a little too simplistic for my own liking.Although,i rather liked the space themed backgrounds,they were very nice.

Animation wise,it was good,like how Globby spills around as he crawls along the ground.The animation on the enemies wasn't too bad either.Not really much else i can say about the Animation of the characters and such.

Gameplay wise,i can see that it was inspired by Kirby,like how you kill enemies and steal their powers,similar to Kirby.From what i had seen,the abilities you get from enemies aren't that imagnative nor original.The were some good ones in there,like the wings,but overall,nothing that original.You probably could have just thought a bit more about that.

The level design wasn't the best,as navigating around the level was quite confusing.You could have gave more signals to where you need to be heading.

Sound wise,it was nice.I liked the music in the levels,though it did get a little repetative,but otherwise it was good.Suited the mood of the Flash game well.
The sound effects were nice too.One or two did sound a little low quality,but it may just be me with that.

Overall,this was quite a fun little game,but it was quite flawed with things such as level design.

Overall good points:
Good sound +2
Fluent Animation +3
Nice Backgrounds +4

Overall points for improvement:
Confusing level design -2
Too simplistic Art -1

Score:6/10 3/5

-Dex

Score: 5

"Not as great as your other works..."

submission: Get on My Horse

date: October 27, 2009

To be honest,i thought this wasn't any where near as good as your other Music video loops.As usual,the song was catchy,which is good,and it looped perfectly.

Art and Animation wise,it was pretty lazy compared to your usual works, as you didn't make a background, even though it was suiting the animation,the characters looked quite out of place on it in my opinion.

The animation was pretty decent,and it was synced well with the music,but in a few places it did fall out of sync a little.But most of the animation itself was pretty boring,because you did recycle some of the same movements.However,you did at least use some different angles.

Overall,this was decent,but not as good as your other works.I know you can do much better than this.

-Dex

Score: 7

"Interesting..."

submission: Cooking (bocodamondo)

date: October 9, 2009

Well,i suppose the most suprising thing you'd see at first about the Flash was that you managed to get popular artists such as Egoraptor to do voices.thats not a bad thing,and i'd say the voices were overall quite good,but your voice wasn't that good.I think getting a better microphone will help you alot in future.

The Artwork wasn't amazing,and could use alot of work.You should work on your lineart more.This looked very freehand drawn,(in other words,with a mouse.)so you should buy a Drawing Tablet,as it helps alot with Digital Art.
The Animation could also use some work,but i have seen alot worse,believe me.After all,practice makes perfect. ;)

The plot was rather generic,but there were a few jokes in there that i thought were quite funny.I understand your English isn't great,so i'll let you off on the script being quite poor.

Overall,this Flash was quite interesting and funny,but the artwork,animation and some of the voice acting could use some work.But i know that you are still learning Flash,and no Flash animator started out amazing.Even the best of the best started out like this.

Keep practicing,and i bet that someday,you'll be a great animator!

-Dex

Score: 10

"Hell freakin' Yes!"

submission: Madness Day Art Collab

date: September 23, 2009

Nicely done Scelestic.

i didn't expect you'd put my first in there though,but i suppose that was a nice suprise.this was awesome to see some of my art in there.

I just want to say,thank you Scelestic for ogranising this awesome art collab,and a congrats to my fellow artists who got into the collab.

-Dex

Score: 3

"Ehh...."

submission: thanks guys...

date: September 12, 2009

What the hell was that?the graphics sucked,as there was no background, and the character was crappy.voice acting was pretty good,but you could hear a little popping sound when you started speaking,but its minor,so not much problems there.

This isn't Youtube mate,you dont just submit these kind of stupid rants.

Score: 10

"I am stunned."

submission: Tarboy

date: August 31, 2009

Amazing.seriously.everything about this Flash reeked with charm and awesomeness.everything from the plot,right down to the humour.The animation and art were very awesome,and this is the kind of quality you'd get on TV.

And im suprised to find a very awesome Flash,sitting on the top 50 for once.Flashes like this need to be up there.unlike all that unfunny crap with terrible animation and art that passes with a score 4.25.truly amazing.

Score: 10

"I really like your stuff Konni."

submission: Frame by Frame.fla

date: August 17, 2009

Very smooth FBF there!Artwork was decent,and i must say that i like your art style alot,and it looks much better now you have a tablet,seeing that it used to look quite sloppy.music choice was good,and the animation itself was synced well.

-Dexter3000

Score: 6

".........................B in space!"

submission: [CD09]B In Space

date: August 16, 2009

Yes its basic,but many parodies of it were.the graphics are pretty good,and the sound choice was nice.but you could have made it loop,because it would have been better that way.pretty good job,Zoid!

-Dexter3000

Score: 6

"A little rough around the edges."

submission: iGot No iPhone

date: July 23, 2009

The graphics were extremely simple.that ins't a bad thing,but could have been better.animation wise,the general animation was decent,but the mouth sinc was awful.

Dexter6000