Not that great...
Well,first i'll talk about the art of the comic.Its simple,which is good,and rather cute.Though the background is poor,as the grass is just very messy and jagged.You could work more on the backgrounds.
As for the content of the comic itself,its a pretty over used concept,or similiar jokes have been used in the past.That,and i don't think the deliverance of the plot would have taken 9 panels.You could have easily done it in 3 or 4 panels.
Overall,this comic wasn't that great,but i was keeping in mind about how you said this comic was only really a doodle.And i dont expect master pieces from doodles.
Yea I get that 9 panal thing a lot. Thanks for the review, but truth be told this was my first comic. Latly I've been working on art, with a new drawing tablet. Charector designs are being worked on with more detail, and hopefully better. Thanks for the review, and the constructive critism. ;)
Pretty good sketch...
Its a pretty nice sketch.i really like what you did with all the bushy fur,it looks great that way.but i do agree with what the other 2 people said,the flames should look more defined and "firey".although,then again,the flames are like that in the Anime,so i suppose you couldn't say there is much wrong with that.woulda been interesting though if you had your own take on them.
other than that,this is a very nice piece.good work,Kittykat!
*Drools over the awesomeness of this art.*
I must say,Vylent,this is one of the greatest pieces i have seen in a while.Everything about this is great,from the posture of the Joker to the to the atmosphere of this piece.Im also suprised that this had only taken you 2 days.But otherwise,this is amazing,as is your other work.I really love your art,infact,your on my favorite artist list.:D
:D thanks for the awesome comment dude
I'm really glad you like my stuff :)
I like your style.
This is good!The postures are pretty good,and the expressions on the characters are great.The lineart is pretty smooth,which is good.This is a nice piece of cartooning here.it would be interesting to see more of your art like this.
I like this painting.the highlights on the claws are good,and the expression suits the character wearing that costume.the only thing i'd really say,is the fact that the pose is not the best.but thats fair enough,because the character looks like its slouching.it could have just had a more interesting pose.(but hey,poses are something i need to work on anyways.)
this was a good piece.keep up the great art Pielover! :)
This isn't art.something made in spore is far from it,as it is just alot of premade choices.its not even 3D art.its not that original either.
I lol at you. You are just jealous because your art sucks, trust me I've seen it, and I've read the reviews, and its terrible. Also, at least I have more than one piece of art, douchebag.
Too basic.FAR too basic for an art submission.the shadowing is ok,but not amazing.the linework is awful,and looks quite scribbled.it may have been a choice of style there,but even if it is,it doesn't fit well at all.
The proportion of the left eye is inbalanced to the right eye,as the left one is smaller in size compared to the right one.The expression is generic.
overall,this is pretty bad,and far too basic.
I don't think you understand how hard drawing with a jerky mouse is.
i like it!the muscles look pretty cool,and the proportions on the legs and arms a accurate.only thing i'd say,is that the head is really small.but it looks quite funny that way.
good one Darkside!
Thanks 4 the review, Dex!
This is a very good self portrait sketch.the facial expression is kinda funny.(i guess thats what you were aiming for.)only thing i would say,is the proportion on the left eye is imbalanced compared to the eye on the right's proportion.same with the pupil in the right eye.the pupil in the right eye looks rather wonky.
but other than that,good job!
i never noticed that until now :O
Compared to the original art by van gogh,this looks quite like it!(which i'd know,because i have a t-shirt with this painting on it.)Only thing i'd say is,the rib cage looks a little too wide in proportion.but still,this was very good!
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